Javed Ali

Introduction: The Thinking Tool You Use Every Day (Now With Better Structure)

You do it when choosing between two movies on a Friday night. You do it when deciding between colleges or job offers. You even do it when scrolling through food delivery apps. Comparison is how we make sense of the world.

A compare and contrast essay simply gives structure to this natural thinking process. But here’s where most students go wrong: they think the goal is to list similarities and differences. The true goal is to illuminate. To answer the “so what?” By placing two subjects side-by-side—be they historical figures, literary works, theories, or technologies—you reveal insights about each that would remain hidden if examined alone.

The secret weapon isn’t just noticing differences; it’s deciding how to organize them for maximum clarity and impact. In this guide, I’ll show you the two classic methods—the Block Method and the Point-by-Point Method—with complete examples. You’ll learn when to use each, how to build a thesis that argues rather than just announces, and how to transform a simple list into a compelling analysis. Let’s turn comparison from a basic skill into a sophisticated tool for understanding.

Part 1: The Goal – From List to Insight

Before we discuss structure, let’s clarify the purpose. Your essay should do more than catalog. It should make a point.

• Weak Purpose: “This essay will compare and contrast high school and college.”
• Strong Purpose: “While both high school and college aim to educate, they differ fundamentally in their structures of accountability, approaches to learning, and expectations of student autonomy, with college serving as a necessary bridge to professional and personal self-reliance.”

See the difference? The second one promises an analysis with a conclusion. Your thesis should hint at what the comparison ultimately reveals.

Part 2: The Two Structural Blueprints

You have two main options for organizing your essay. Your choice depends on your subjects, their complexity, and what you want to emphasize.

Method 1: The Block Method (Subject-by-Subject)

• How it works: Discuss all points about Subject A first, then all the same points about Subject B.
• Structure:
  • Introduction with Thesis
  • Block 1: Subject A (Point 1, Point 2, Point 3)
  • Block 2: Subject B (Point 1, Point 2, Point 3) <– Discussed in the same order!
  • Conclusion
• Best for:
  • Shorter essays.
  • When you want to give a holistic, integrated picture of each subject before comparing.
  • When the points of comparison are broad or few.
• The Danger: It can read like two separate mini-essays if you don’t use strong transitions and a concluding synthesis that directly compares.

Method 2: The Point-by-Point Method

• How it works: Discuss both subjects together for each specific point of comparison.
• Structure:
  • Introduction with Thesis
  • Point 1: Subject A vs. Subject B
  • Point 2: Subject A vs. Subject B
  • Point 3: Subject A vs. Subject B
  • Conclusion
• Best for:
  • Longer, more complex essays.
  • When you want to emphasize direct comparison and contrast throughout.
  • When you have many specific points; this keeps the reader from having to remember what you said about Subject A many paragraphs earlier.
• The Danger: It can feel repetitive or mechanical if not written with varied sentence structure and insightful analysis.

Part 3: The Writing Process, Step-by-Step

Step 1: Brainstorm with a Venn Diagram or List

Draw two overlapping circles. In the left circle, list traits unique to Subject A. In the right, traits unique to Subject B. In the overlap, list similarities. This is your raw material.

Step 2: Develop an Analytical Thesis

Ask: What is the significant relationship between these two subjects? Does one seem superior? Do they represent an evolution? A fundamental trade-off?

• Formula: *”While [Subject A] and [Subject B] share [similarity], they differ fundamentally in [key difference 1], [key difference 2], and [key difference 3], ultimately revealing/reinforcing/suggesting [your main insight].”*

Step 3: Choose Your Structure and Outline

Based on your brainstorming, decide which method will best serve your thesis. Then, build your outline using one of the templates below.

Step 4: Write with Effective Transitions

For Block Method: Use concluding sentences in Block 1 that look forward to Block 2. (“While the high school structure is rigid, college demands a different approach.”). Start Block 2 by linking back (“In contrast to high school’s mandatory schedule, college…“).
For Point-by-Point: Use clear comparative language: Similarly, In the same way, Conversely, On the other hand, In contrast, However.

Step 5: Revise for Balance and Insight

Ensure you give roughly equal space to each subject and each point. Most importantly, check every paragraph: does it just state a fact, or does it explain the significance of that similarity or difference?

Part 4: Example Outlines & Sample Essay

Topic: Public Libraries vs. Digital Streaming Services (like Netflix)
Thesis: Though both public libraries and digital streaming services provide public access to media and information, they represent opposing models centered on community curation versus algorithmic personalization, passive consumption versus active discovery, and public good versus commercial interest.

Outline A: Block Method

• Intro: Hook, Thesis.
• Block 1: The Public Library Model
  • Point 1: Human/Community Curation (Librarians, local interest).
  • Point 2: Encourages Active Discovery (Browsing physical shelves, serendipity).
  • Point 3: Mission of Public, Equitable Access (Funded by taxes, free).
• Block 2: The Digital Streaming Model
  • Point 1: Algorithmic/Personalized Curation (AI recommendations based on your history).
  • Point 2: Encourages Passive, Infinite Consumption (Autoplay, endless scroll).
  • Point 3: Mission of Commercial Engagement & Profit (Subscription model, data collection).
• Conclusion: Synthesis of the two models and what each says about our relationship with information.

Outline B: Point-by-Point Method

• Intro: Hook, Thesis.
• Point 1: Curation Method
  • Libraries: Human, community-focused.
  • Streaming: Algorithmic, individually-focused.
• Point 2: User Engagement Model
  • Libraries: Active discovery, purposeful browsing.
  • Streaming: Passive consumption, designed for retention.
• Point 3: Underlying Mission & Economics
  • Libraries: Public good, funded for equitable access.
  • Streaming: Private profit, funded by subscriptions and data.
• Conclusion: Synthesis.

Sample Essay (Using Point-by-Point Method)

(Introduction)
In the quest for a book or film, we face a modern choice: the quiet halls of the public library or the instant queue of a digital streaming service. While both institutions provide access to stories and information, they are built on fundamentally different logics. Public libraries and streaming platforms like Netflix differ most profoundly in their methods of curation, their models of user engagement, and their core missions, representing a broader cultural shift from shared public resources to personalized commercial experiences.

(Body Paragraph 1: Curation Method)
The first major distinction lies in what guides users to content. Public libraries rely on human and community-based curation. Librarians select materials based on professional judgment, literary merit, and the needs of the local community. A display might feature local authors or titles for an upcoming city-wide reading event. In stark contrast, streaming services operate on algorithmic, personalized curation. Sophisticated AI recommends the next show based entirely on a user’s past viewing history and the habits of similar users. This creates a powerful echo chamber, where one is unlikely to stumble upon a documentary about ancient history after binge-watching cooking shows, no matter its quality.

(Body Paragraph 2: User Engagement Model)
These curation methods foster entirely different patterns of engagement. The library model encourages active discovery and purposeful browsing. Patrons often arrive with a specific need but find themselves drawn into adjacent aisles, discovering a book they didn’t know they wanted by its cover or placement. There is a tangible element of serendipity. Conversely, the streaming model is engineered for passive, infinite consumption. Features like autoplay and the endless scroll are designed to minimize decision fatigue and maximize screen time. The goal is not to help you find something meaningful, but to keep you watching—a subtle but crucial difference.

(Body Paragraph 3: Underlying Mission & Economics)
Ultimately, this divergence stems from their core missions. Public libraries exist as a public good, funded by taxes with a mandate for equitable access. Their success is measured not in profit, but in community literacy, lifelong learning, and providing a safe, neutral space for all citizens. Digital streaming services, however, are commercial enterprises. Their success is measured in subscriber growth, retention, and profitability. User data is a key asset, and content is often chosen or created based on its potential to attract and retain a paying audience, not its cultural or educational value.

(Conclusion)
The choice between the library and the streaming service, then, is more than one of convenience. It is a choice between a model that values community, serendipity, and the public trust, and one that prioritizes personalization, engagement, and commercial return. One invites us to be citizens in a shared space of knowledge; the other treats us as consumers in a personalized feed. Understanding this contrast is essential for consciously navigating—and preserving—our increasingly digital landscape of information.

Part 5: Pro-Tips for a Standout Essay

1. Avoid the “Tennis Match” Trap: Don’t just bounce back and forth with “Subject A does this. Subject B does that.” Weave them together: “While Subject A does this, Subject B takes an alternative approach by…”
2. Compare the Comparable: Ensure your points of comparison are equivalent. Don’t discuss the cost of one subject and the color of the other.
3. Use “Lens” Comparisons: For more advanced essays, use one subject as a lens to analyze the other. (e.g., “Viewing modern social media through the lens of ancient Greek rhetoric reveals…”).
4. Conclude with a Synthesis: Your conclusion should answer: Having compared these, what do we now understand that we didn’t before?

Conclusion: Comparison as a Superpower

Mastering the compare and contrast essay trains you to see nuance, evaluate options critically, and communicate complex relationships clearly. It’s a framework for decision-making and analysis that extends far beyond the classroom.

Don’t just list. Illuminate. Use the structure not as a cage, but as a scaffold to build a meaningful argument about how two things relate in a way that matters.

Your Next Step: Look at two items on your desk right now (e.g., a pen and a pencil, a physical book and an e-reader). Quickly jot down two similarities and two differences. Then, push further: what does this simple comparison reveal about design, purpose, or changing habits? That’s the seed of an essay.

Your Comparison Challenge (Comment Below!):

Let’s practice choosing a structure. Pick one of the pairs below:

1. Two social media platforms (e.g., TikTok vs. Instagram)
2. Two learning methods (e.g., in-person vs. online classes)
3. Two leaders or influencers in the same field.

In the comments, tell us:

1. Your chosen pair.
2. One point of comparison you’d analyze (e.g., “their primary content format” or “their measure of success”).
3. Which structure (Block or Point-by-Point) you think would work better and why.

I’ll help you refine your point and structure choice. Let’s build those comparative muscles!

Introduction: The Essay That Doesn’t Just See—It X-Rays

Most essays tell you what happens. An analytical essay tells you why and how it matters. It’s the difference between saying “This character dies” and revealing “This character’s death is the engine of the entire plot’s critique of societal indifference.”

This type of essay is where you move from being a reader to being a critic, a detective, and an interpreter. It’s challenging because it demands you dismantle a text—a poem, a novel, a painting, a film—to see the gears turning inside. Many students stumble by simply summarizing the plot or listing literary devices without tying them to a larger, arguable point.

The secret? An analytical essay isn’t about the text. It’s about your unique argument about the text. The text is your evidence, not your subject.

In this guide, I won’t just give you an example and wish you luck. I will dissect one, line-by-line, showing you the exact moves that transform observation into analysis. We’ll use a classic short story, Shirley Jackson’s “The Lottery,” as our subject. By the end, you’ll see the blueprint behind the prose and be able to apply it to any analytical task.

Part 1: What We’re Analyzing & Our Core Argument

The Text: Shirley Jackson’s short story “The Lottery” (1948).
The Prompt: Analyze how Shirley Jackson uses symbolism in “The Lottery” to critique blind adherence to tradition.

Our Thesis (The Argument We’ll Prove):
In “The Lottery,” Shirley Jackson employs the symbolic weight of the black box, the slips of paper, and the lottery ritual itself to expose the profound violence and irrationality embedded in unquestioned societal traditions.

This thesis is strong because it is:

1. Arguable: Someone could focus on other elements (setting, character).
2. Specific: Names three specific symbols (black box, papers, ritual).
3. Demonstrable: Points directly to evidence in the text.

Part 2: The Full Analytical Essay Example

Below is a complete, short-form analytical essay. The comments in [bold brackets] are my line-by-line breakdown of why each part works.

Title: The Boxed-In Society: Symbolism of Conformity in “The Lottery”

Introduction Paragraph
Shirley Jackson’s “The Lottery” remains a chilling masterpiece not for its graphic violence, but for the mundane horror of its premise: a peaceful village conducting an annual ritual murder. Jackson’s power lies in her subversion of seemingly benign symbols, transforming ordinary objects into vessels of terror. [Hook: Starts with the story’s enduring relevance and central paradox—mundane horror.] Through her deliberate symbolic use of the deteriorating black box, the neutral slips of paper, and the ritualized lottery process, Jackson constructs a devastating critique of traditions that persist not through wisdom, but through fear, habit, and the suppression of individual conscience. [Thesis: Clearly states the argument and previews the three symbolic elements to be analyzed. It frames the analysis (a “devastating critique”) and names the mechanisms (“fear, habit, suppression”).]

Body Paragraph 1: Analyzing the Black Box
The black box, the physical centerpiece of the lottery, serves as the story’s most potent symbol of a corrupted and fragile tradition. [Topic Sentence: Directly connects one symbol (black box) to the thesis’s claim about tradition.] Jackson notes it is “shabby,” “splintered,” and no longer even truly black, having faded over time. [Evidence: Provides specific, descriptive quotes from the text.] This deterioration is not incidental; it symbolizes the decay of the ritual’s original meaning and function. [Analysis: This is the crucial step—it explains what the evidence means.] The villagers cling to the box not out of reverence, but out of a superstitious fear of change, as shown by the whispered talk of replacing it that “always faded off without anything being done.” [More Evidence & Analysis: Uses another quote and immediately ties it to the concept of “fear of change,” proving the topic sentence.] Thus, the box represents tradition itself: oppressive, illogical, and maintained not by its own strength, but by the collective anxiety of those who cannot imagine breaking free from it. [Concluding Sentence: Summarizes the paragraph’s argument and links it back to the thesis’s broader critique.]

Body Paragraph 2: Analyzing the Slips of Paper
Jackson further deepens her critique by using the slips of paper to symbolize the false equality and random cruelty of the ritual. [Topic Sentence: Introduces the second symbol and links it to a new aspect of the critique (“false equality, random cruelty”).] On the surface, the papers are identical, and every family head draws one, suggesting a fair, democratic process. [Observation: Sets up the surface-level, “literal” reading.] However, this neutrality is a veneer. The single marked paper—the one with the black spot—transforms an ordinary scrap into a death warrant. [Contrast & Analysis: Introduces the “however” to show the deeper meaning. The analysis shows how the symbol works ironically.] Jackson highlights this shift when Tessie Hutchinson, upon seeing the spot on her paper, screams, “It wasn’t fair!” [Evidence: Powerful, thematic quote used as proof.] Her cry reveals the truth: the ritual’s illusion of fairness masks a brutal, arbitrary selection. The papers symbolize how systems can use the trappings of fairness (“everyone draws”) to legitimize inherent injustice, making victims complicit in their own potential destruction until they are the ones chosen. Analysis & Conclusion: Sophisticated analysis connecting the symbol to systemic injustice and complicity, advancing the thesis.

Body Paragraph 3: Analyzing the Ritual Process
Ultimately, the symbolism of the entire lottery ritual lies in its stark contrast between orderly procedure and barbaric outcome. [Topic Sentence: Focuses on the “ritual” as a macro-symbol, tying it to the key contrast of order/barbarism.] Jackson meticulously details the steps: the assembly of families, the official swearing-in, the precise rules for drawing. [Evidence: References the text’s detailed procedure.] This procedural normalcy makes the horrific climax—the stoning of a neighbor—possible. The symbolism here is in the juxtaposition: the community uses the language and form of civic duty (“lottery in June, corn be heavy soon”) to sanction murder. [Analysis: Explains the symbolic power of the juxtaposition. Connects the ritual’s form to its function (sanctioning murder).] The ritual, therefore, symbolizes the human capacity to compartmentalize, to cloak violence in the respectable garb of tradition and social necessity. It is not the violence of a mob, but the violence of a committee—a far more terrifying notion. [Concluding Sentence: Offers a profound, arguable insight (“violence of a committee”) that stems directly from the analysis, leaving a lasting impression.]

Conclusion
Through the layered symbolism of the black box, the slips of paper, and the ritual itself, Shirley Jackson performs a surgical dissection of societal conformity. [Restates Thesis in New Words: Synthesizes the three points from the body paragraphs.] She demonstrates that the most dangerous traditions are not those practiced by monsters, but by ordinary people who have ceased to question the boxes they draw from, the papers they hold, or the stones they throw. Synthesis: Weaves the symbols together into a single, powerful statement about human nature. “The Lottery” endures as a warning not about a fictional village, but about the very real, quiet ceremonies of cruelty we accept simply because they are, as the villagers say, “the way it’s always been.” Clincher: Broadens the significance to the reader’s world, ending on a resonant, thematic note from the text.

Part 3: The Line-by-Line Breakdown: The “Why” Behind Every Move

Let’s zoom in on the mechanics. Here’s what each part of the essay is designed to do:

The Introduction: The Funnel

1. Hook (Broad): Connects the text to a universal idea (mundane horror).
2. Bridge (Narrows): Mentions Jackson’s method (subversion of symbols).
3. Thesis (Specific & Arguable): A clear, three-part map of the essay. It doesn’t say “I will discuss symbols.” It says how those symbols function (“to construct a critique”) and what they critique (“traditions that persist through fear, habit…”).

The Body Paragraphs: The C-E-A-C Machine
Each paragraph is a mini-essay following the Claim-Evidence-Analysis-Conclusion model.

• Claim (Topic Sentence): Makes a specific, arguable claim about one symbol’s role. It’s a direct subset of the thesis.
• Evidence: Embeds brief, potent quotes or paraphrases. Never a quote without a setup.
• Analysis (The Heart): This is where 90% of the grade is earned. It answers:
  • What does this evidence mean?
  • How does it prove my topic sentence?
  • What is the deeper pattern or concept it reveals?
  • Note: The analysis often uses words like: signifies, reveals, highlights, underscores, suggests, symbolizes, contrasts, implies.
• Conclusion (Concluding Sentence): Wraps up the paragraph’s argument and often links it back to the thesis’s bigger point.

The Conclusion: The Amplifier

• Synthesis, Not Summary: It doesn’t list points. It says, “When you look at all this together, here’s the profound truth it reveals.”
• Broadens Significance: Answers “So what?” Why does this analysis matter beyond this essay? Connects the text to the human condition.
• Clincher: Ends with a final, elegant thought—often a callback to the text or hook—that leaves the reader thinking.

Part 4: Your Analytical Toolkit: Questions to Ask Any Text

To generate your own analysis, interrogate the text with these questions:

• Patterns & Repetitions: What objects, colors, words, or images keep appearing? What might they represent?
• Contradictions & Juxtapositions: Where does the text set up a contrast (e.g., peaceful village/violent act)? What is the effect of that contrast?
• Shifts & Changes: Does a character’s perspective change? Does the tone shift? What causes the shift, and what does it reveal?
• The “So What?” Test: Okay, the author used a metaphor. What does that metaphor do? How does it shape my understanding of the character, theme, or conflict?

Conclusion: From Observer to Analyst

Writing an analytical essay is an active, creative process. You are building a case. The text is your crime scene, the quotes are your fingerprints, and your analysis is the detective’s report that explains how and why the crime (the text’s meaning) was committed.

Start small. Don’t try to analyze the entire novel. Pick one symbol, one scene, one repeated phrase. Dig into it with the C-E-A-C method. Your argument will grow from there.

Remember: Your professor has read the book. They don’t need a summary. They need your insight. Give them the X-ray, not the photograph.

Your Next Step: Take a short text you know well (a poem, a song, a short story). Choose one literary device used in it. Write one analytical paragraph following the C-E-A-C model. Practice is the only path to mastery.

Your Analysis Drill (Comment Below!):

Let’s practice on a universally known text: Cinderella.

Focus on one symbol in the story (the glass slipper, the pumpkin carriage, the clock striking midnight).

In the comments, write:

1. Your mini-claim about what that symbol represents. (e.g., “The glass slipper symbolizes not just romantic destiny, but the oppressive ideal of a perfect, restrictive fit for women in that society.”)
2. One piece of “evidence” (describe the moment in the story).
3. One sentence of analysis connecting the two.

I’ll provide feedback on the strength and depth of your analytical link. Let’s sharpen those critical lenses!

Introduction: The Formatting Freak-Out (And How to End It)

You’ve done the hard part. You’ve researched, argued, and written a brilliant paper. Now, you’re staring at the syllabus: “Format: APA 7th Edition” or “Please use MLA 9th Edition guidelines.”

A wave of dread washes over you. Is the title centered or left-aligned? Where does the page number go? Is it “References” or “Works Cited”? Is the author’s first name spelled out or abbreviated?

You are not alone. For generations of students, citation formatting has felt like a secret ritual designed to trip you up at the finish line. But here’s the liberating truth: MLA and APA are not arbitrary torture devices. They are communication tools. Their purpose is to create a uniform, clear system so that any reader can easily find and verify your sources.

Think of them as different languages for different academic conversations. MLA is the language of the humanities (literature, art, philosophy), focusing on the author and the word. APA is the language of the social sciences (psychology, education, business), focusing on the date and the replicability of research.

This guide will cut through the noise. We’ll focus on the big, common differences with clear, side-by-side visual examples. By the end, you’ll have a mental checklist to format any paper correctly, turning a source of anxiety into a simple final polish.

Part 1: The Big Picture: When to Use Which?

Use MLA (Modern Language Association) Format For:

• English, Literature, Comparative Literature
• Cultural Studies, Art History, Philosophy
• Foreign Languages, Humanities essays

Use APA (American Psychological Association) Format For:

• Psychology, Sociology, Political Science
• Education, Business, Economics
• Nursing, Social Sciences papers

The Core Philosophy Difference:

• MLA asks: “Who wrote this, and in which work can I find it?” (Author & Text are key).
• APA asks: “Who conducted this research, and when?” (Author & Date are key, because newer research is often more relevant).

Part 2: Side-by-Side Visual Guide: The First Page

This is where the differences are most visible.

Visual Example: MLA First Page (Literature Paper)

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MLA 9th Edition Rules:

1. Header: Your last name + page number (e.g., “Smith 1”), right-aligned on every page.
2. Upper Left Corner: Your name, instructor’s name, course, date (formatted as “Day Month Year” e.g., “27 October 2023”).
3. Title: Centered, standard font (no bold, underline, or quotes). Title Case.
4. Text: Left-aligned, double-spaced throughout, with a 1-inch margin. Indent the first line of each paragraph 0.5 inches.

Visual Example: APA First Page (Research Report)

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APA 7th Edition Rules:

1. Running Head & Page Number: A shortened version of your TITLE in ALL CAPS (left-aligned) and the page number (right-aligned) on every page. On the first page only, it is preceded by the words “Running head:”.
2. Title Page: Title (bolded, centered), your name, your institution (e.g., University of California). All centered and double-spaced.
3. Text: Left-aligned, double-spaced, with a 1-inch margin. Indent the first line of each paragraph 0.5 inches.

Part 3: Side-by-Side: In-Text Citations

How you cite a source within your sentences.

MLA In-Text Citation

• Focus: Author + Page Number.
• Format: (Author Page).
• No comma between author and page number.
• If no page number (website), just use (Author).

Examples:

• Romantic poetry is characterized by the “spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings” (Wordsworth 263).
• The author argues that this trend is detrimental to society (Garcia).

APA In-Text Citation

• Focus: Author + Date.
• Format: (Author, Year) or (Author, Year, p. X) for a direct quote.
• Use a comma between author and date.
• Use “p.” for one page, “pp.” for multiple pages.

Examples:

• Recent studies contradict this claim (Smith, 2020).
• The survey concluded that “a majority of participants reported increased anxiety” (Lee & Chen, 2022, p. 15).

Part 4: Side-by-Side: The References Page

The final page listing all your sources.

MLA: “Works Cited” Page

• Title: “Works Cited” (centered, not bolded).
• Order: Alphabetical by author’s last name. If no author, alphabetize by title (ignore “A,” “An,” “The”).
• Hanging Indent: The first line of each entry is flush left; subsequent lines are indented 0.5 inches.
• Author Name: Last Name, First Name. (e.g., “Angelou, Maya.”).
• Containers: Key concept. The source is in a “container” (e.g., a poem is in a book, an article is in a journal, a page is on a website). You list the smaller item, then the larger container.

Example MLA Works Cited Entry (Book):

text

Angelou, Maya. I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings. Random House, 1969.

APA: “References” Page

• Title: “References” (bolded, centered).
• Order: Alphabetical by author’s last name. If no author, alphabetize by title.
• Hanging Indent: Same as MLA.
• Author Name: Last Name, First Initial. (e.g., “Smith, J. A.”).
• Date: In parentheses, right after the author(s). (Year, Month Day). For a journal, just (Year).
• Italics: Italicize titles of longer works (books, journals, websites). Do NOT italicize or use quotes for shorter works (article titles, web page titles).

Example APA References Entry (Journal Article):

text

Smith, J. A., & Chen, L. (2022). The impact of social media on adolescent sleep patterns. *Journal of Adolescent Health*, 70(4), 550-555. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jadohealth.2021.10.012

> > [DOWNLOAD: MLA vs. APA Quick-Reference Cheat Sheet (PDF)] <<

Part 5: Common Element Comparison Chart

Feature	MLA 9th Edition	APA 7th Edition
Cover Page	Not required unless specified. Info goes on first page.	Required. Title, author, institution.
Page Header	Last name + page # (right).	Running head (SHORT TITLE) left, page # right.
Title	Centered, plain text.	Centered, bolded.
In-Text Citation	(Author Page) – No comma.	(Author, Year, p. X) – Uses comma & “p.”
References List Title	Works Cited (centered).	References (centered, bold).
Author Name	Wordsworth, William.	Wordsworth, W.
Source Title (Book)	Italicized.	Italicized.
Article/Chapter Title	In “quotation marks”.	Plain text, no quotes. Sentence case.
Date	Near end of entry, full date if available.	Right after author, (Year).
URLs/DOIs	Include full URL (no “https://”). No period at end.	Include DOI as a hyperlink if available. Use a period at the end.

Part 6: Pro-Tips to Never Get It Wrong

1. Use a Citation Generator… Wisely: Tools like ZoteroBib, MyBib, or the one in Word/Google Docs are great starting points. BUT, always double-check their output against an official guide. They often make subtle errors.
2. Find a Model Paper: Search for “[Your School] Library APA sample paper” or “Purdue OWL MLA sample paper.” Format yours to match, element by element.
3. The “Look It Up” Shortcut: Bookmark the Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL). It’s the free, gold-standard resource for both MLA and APA. When in doubt, OWL it out.
4. Consistency is King: It’s better to be consistently slightly wrong (and lose a point) than to be haphazard (which looks careless). Pick one style guide and stick to its rules throughout.

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Conclusion: Formatting is the Suit Your Paper Wears

A well-formatted paper is like wearing the right outfit to an event. It shows respect for the occasion (academia), makes you look put-together (credible), and ensures people focus on what you’re saying (your ideas), not what you’re wearing (sloppy formatting).

Don’t let the ritual overshadow the reason. These formats exist to serve clarity and credibility. Learn the basic rules, use your tools, and then direct your energy back to what matters most: your analysis, your argument, your voice.

Your Next Step: Open your most recent paper. Even if it’s already graded, try reformatting it from MLA to APA or vice-versa as an exercise. This hands-on practice is the fastest way to learn the differences.

Your Formatting Clinic (Comment Below!):

Let’s practice the most common task: creating a citation entry.

Take this source information:

• Author: Naomi Klein
• Book Title: This Changes Everything: Capitalism vs. The Climate
• Publisher: Simon & Schuster
• Year: 2014

In the comments:

1. Write the MLA 9th Edition Works Cited entry.
2. Write the APA 7th Edition References entry.

I’ll check your work and provide feedback. Let’s nail those citations!

Introduction: Why Writing an Essay Feels So Hard (And How to Make It Simple)

You’re not alone. That blinking cursor on a blank document is one of the most intimidating sights for students everywhere. Whether it’s for a high school class, a college application, or a scholarship, the pressure to “get it right” can freeze even the best thinkers.

Here’s the secret most teachers don’t have time to explain: Writing an essay isn’t about being a genius. It’s about following a process.

Think of it like building a house. You don’t start by picking out curtains. You start with a blueprint. This guide is your blueprint.

I’ve tutored dozens of panicked students and written hundreds of essays myself. The ones who succeed aren’t the “natural writers”—they’re the ones who have a reliable system. By the end of this guide, you’ll have that system. We’re going to break the monolithic task of “writing an essay” into seven manageable, foolproof steps.

Let’s build your essay from the ground up.

Step 1: Deconstruct the Prompt (Don’t Skip This!)

Your essay prompt is your roadmap. Misreading it is the #1 reason students write good essays that get bad grades.

Action Plan:

• Circle the directive verbs. What are you being asked to do?
  • Analyze: Break it down. Examine the parts.
  • Argue/Persuade: Take a position and defend it.
  • Compare & Contrast: Find similarities and differences.
  • Describe/Explain: Make it clear. Show how or why.
• Underline the key subject. What is the main thing you must write about?
• Highlight any limitations. Is there a specific time period, text, or concept you must use?

Example Prompt: “Analyze the impact of social media on the political engagement of young adults in the last decade.”

• Verb: Analyze (so you need to break down the cause/effect, not just describe).
• Subject: Impact of social media on political engagement.
• Limitations: Young adults, last decade.

If you’re unsure, ask your instructor for clarification now. It saves hours of rewriting later.

Step 2: Brainstorm & Research with a Purpose

Don’t just start writing. First, you need raw material.

The Brain Dump (5 Minutes)

Set a timer. Write down every single idea, word, or question that comes to mind about the prompt. No filtering, no judging. This gets ideas flowing and overcomes the initial blank-page fear.

Focused Research

Now, use your brain dump to guide your research. Look for:

• Key facts and statistics to support your points.
• Quotes from experts or primary sources.
• Opposing viewpoints (understanding the other side makes your argument stronger).

Pro-Tip: As you research, copy quotes and facts into a document WITH THEIR SOURCE URL OR CITATION. Trust me, you’ll thank yourself later when citing.

Step 3: Craft Your Thesis Statement – Your Essay’s North Star

This is the single most important sentence in your essay. Your entire essay exists to support this one statement.

A strong thesis is:

1. Debatable: It’s an argument, not a fact. “Social media exists” is a fact. “Social media has net-harmed political discourse” is an argument.
2. Specific: It names what you’ll discuss.
3. Manageable: You can defend it within your essay’s length.

Formula: [Your claim] because/based on [your main reasons].

• Weak: “This essay is about social media and politics.”
• Strong: “While social media has increased awareness of political issues among young adults, its algorithms have ultimately fostered polarization and discouraged nuanced debate, as evidenced by rising toxicity online and declining trust in institutions.”

See the difference? The strong thesis tells the reader exactly what to expect and what your position is.

Step 4: Build Your Outline – The Essay’s Skeleton

An outline is your plan of attack. It turns a scary 1000-word essay into 5-6 manageable chunks.

Classic 5-Paragraph Structure (Adaptable for any length):

• Introduction (1 Paragraph)
  • Hook: A surprising fact, a question, a brief story.
  • Context: Briefly introduce the topic.
  • Thesis Statement: Your main argument (from Step 3).
• Body Paragraphs (3+ Paragraphs)
  • Paragraph 1: Main Point #1 (Your strongest argument).
    • Topic Sentence: States the point.
    • Evidence: Data, quote, or example.
    • Analysis: Explain how this evidence proves your point.
    • Concluding Sentence: Link back to the thesis.
  • Paragraph 2: Main Point #2.
  • Paragraph 3: Main Point #3 (or a counterargument you refute).
• Conclusion (1 Paragraph)
  • Restate Thesis (in new words).
  • Summarize Main Points.
  • Broader Implications/Final Thought: Why does this matter? What should the reader think or do now?

Step 5: Write the First Draft – Silence Your Inner Critic

This is where you follow your blueprint. Your only goal is to get words on the page. It does not have to be perfect.

The Golden Rule of Drafting: Write now, edit later.

• Start with the body paragraphs. They are easier than the intro.
• Follow your outline sentence by sentence.
• If you get stuck on a word, write [WORD] and move on.
• Don’t stop to fix spelling or grammar. Just build the structure.

The magic happens in revision. A bad first draft is infinitely better than a perfect blank page.

Step 6: Revise for Structure and Argument (The “Big Picture” Edit)

Once your draft is complete, take a break. Then, read it with fresh eyes. DO NOT look for typos yet. Ask these big questions:

• Thesis & Focus: Does every paragraph connect back to and support the thesis?
• Flow: Do ideas logically progress from one to the next? Use transition words (next, furthermore, however, consequently).
• Evidence: Is each claim supported by a fact, example, or quote? Is the analysis clear?
• Clarity: Is each sentence easy to understand? Are any points confusing?

This is where you might move whole paragraphs, add a section, or rewrite a topic sentence.

Step 7: Edit for Clarity and Polish (The “Fine-Tuning” Edit)

Now, get nitpicky.

• Sentences: Vary their length. Read it aloud—does it sound awkward?
• Words: Replace vague words with specific ones (“good” -> “effective,” “important” -> “critical”).
• Grammar & Spelling: Use tools like Grammarly, but don’t rely on them blindly.
• Citations: Check every quote and fact has the correct citation (MLA, APA, Chicago).
• Formatting: Double-spacing, font, margins, title page.

The Final Test: The “Read Aloud” Edit
Read your entire essay aloud, slowly. Your ear will catch clunky phrasing, run-on sentences, and errors your eye will skip over.

Conclusion: You’ve Built More Than an Essay

You started with a blank page and a feeling of dread. Now, you have a structured, argued, and polished piece of writing. More importantly, you have a process.

The next time an essay is assigned, you won’t feel panic. You’ll feel prepared. You’ll know to start with the prompt, build your thesis, outline your points, and trust the drafting process. Essay writing becomes a skill you own, not a mystery you fear.

Your Next Step: Pick one upcoming assignment and try this system, step-by-step. I promise it gets easier and faster each time.

Let’s Practice Together (Comment Below!):

Grab a prompt from one of your classes. In the comments, write:

1. The directive verb you circled.
2. Your one-sentence brainstormed idea.
3. A first try at a thesis statement.

I’ll hop into the comments and give feedback to help you get started. Let’s write!

Introduction: Why Writing an Essay Feels So Hard (And How to Make It Simple)

You’re not alone. That blinking cursor on a blank document is one of the most intimidating sights for students everywhere. Whether it’s for a high school class, a college application, or a scholarship, the pressure to “get it right” can freeze even the best thinkers.

Here’s the secret most teachers don’t have time to explain: Writing an essay isn’t about being a genius. It’s about following a process.

Think of it like building a house. You don’t start by picking out curtains. You start with a blueprint. This guide is your blueprint.

I’ve tutored dozens of panicked students and written hundreds of essays myself. The ones who succeed aren’t the “natural writers”—they’re the ones who have a reliable system. By the end of this guide, you’ll have that system. We’re going to break the monolithic task of “writing an essay” into seven manageable, foolproof steps.

Let’s build your essay from the ground up.

Step 1: Deconstruct the Prompt (Don’t Skip This!)

Your essay prompt is your roadmap. Misreading it is the #1 reason students write good essays that get bad grades.

Action Plan:

· Circle the directive verbs. What are you being asked to do?
· Analyze: Break it down. Examine the parts.
· Argue/Persuade: Take a position and defend it.
· Compare & Contrast: Find similarities and differences.
· Describe/Explain: Make it clear. Show how or why.
· Underline the key subject. What is the main thing you must write about?
· Highlight any limitations. Is there a specific time period, text, or concept you must use?

Example Prompt: “Analyze the impact of social media on the political engagement of young adults in the last decade.”

· Verb: Analyze (so you need to break down the cause/effect, not just describe).
· Subject: Impact of social media on political engagement.
· Limitations: Young adults, last decade.

If you’re unsure, ask your instructor for clarification now. It saves hours of rewriting later.

Step 2: Brainstorm & Research with a Purpose

Don’t just start writing. First, you need raw material.

The Brain Dump (5 Minutes)

Set a timer. Write down every single idea, word, or question that comes to mind about the prompt. No filtering, no judging. This gets ideas flowing and overcomes the initial blank-page fear.

Focused Research

Now, use your brain dump to guide your research. Look for:

· Key facts and statistics to support your points.
· Quotes from experts or primary sources.
· Opposing viewpoints (understanding the other side makes your argument stronger).

Pro-Tip: As you research, copy quotes and facts into a document WITH THEIR SOURCE URL OR CITATION. Trust me, you’ll thank yourself later when citing.

Step 3: Craft Your Thesis Statement – Your Essay’s North Star

This is the single most important sentence in your essay. Your entire essay exists to support this one statement.

A strong thesis is:

1. Debatable: It’s an argument, not a fact. “Social media exists” is a fact. “Social media has net-harmed political discourse” is an argument.
2. Specific: It names what you’ll discuss.
3. Manageable: You can defend it within your essay’s length.

Formula: [Your claim] because/based on [your main reasons].

· Weak: “This essay is about social media and politics.”
· Strong: “While social media has increased awareness of political issues among young adults, its algorithms have ultimately fostered polarization and discouraged nuanced debate, as evidenced by rising toxicity online and declining trust in institutions.”

See the difference? The strong thesis tells the reader exactly what to expect and what your position is.

Step 4: Build Your Outline – The Essay’s Skeleton

An outline is your plan of attack. It turns a scary 1000-word essay into 5-6 manageable chunks.

Classic 5-Paragraph Structure (Adaptable for any length):

· Introduction (1 Paragraph)
· Hook: A surprising fact, a question, a brief story.
· Context: Briefly introduce the topic.
· Thesis Statement: Your main argument (from Step 3).
· Body Paragraphs (3+ Paragraphs)
· Paragraph 1: Main Point #1 (Your strongest argument).
· Topic Sentence: States the point.
· Evidence: Data, quote, or example.
· Analysis: Explain how this evidence proves your point.
· Concluding Sentence: Link back to the thesis.
· Paragraph 2: Main Point #2.
· Paragraph 3: Main Point #3 (or a counterargument you refute).
· Conclusion (1 Paragraph)
· Restate Thesis (in new words).
· Summarize Main Points.
· Broader Implications/Final Thought: Why does this matter? What should the reader think or do now?

Step 5: Write the First Draft – Silence Your Inner Critic

This is where you follow your blueprint. Your only goal is to get words on the page. It does not have to be perfect.

The Golden Rule of Drafting: Write now, edit later.

· Start with the body paragraphs. They are easier than the intro.
· Follow your outline sentence by sentence.
· If you get stuck on a word, write [WORD] and move on.
· Don’t stop to fix spelling or grammar. Just build the structure.

The magic happens in revision. A bad first draft is infinitely better than a perfect blank page.

Step 6: Revise for Structure and Argument (The “Big Picture” Edit)

Once your draft is complete, take a break. Then, read it with fresh eyes. DO NOT look for typos yet. Ask these big questions:

· Thesis & Focus: Does every paragraph connect back to and support the thesis?
· Flow: Do ideas logically progress from one to the next? Use transition words (next, furthermore, however, consequently).
· Evidence: Is each claim supported by a fact, example, or quote? Is the analysis clear?
· Clarity: Is each sentence easy to understand? Are any points confusing?

This is where you might move whole paragraphs, add a section, or rewrite a topic sentence.

Step 7: Edit for Clarity and Polish (The “Fine-Tuning” Edit)

Now, get nitpicky.

· Sentences: Vary their length. Read it aloud—does it sound awkward?
· Words: Replace vague words with specific ones (“good” -> “effective,” “important” -> “critical”).
· Grammar & Spelling: Use tools like Grammarly, but don’t rely on them blindly.
· Citations: Check every quote and fact has the correct citation (MLA, APA, Chicago).
· Formatting: Double-spacing, font, margins, title page.

The Final Test: The “Read Aloud” Edit
Read your entire essay aloud,slowly. Your ear will catch clunky phrasing, run-on sentences, and errors your eye will skip over.

Conclusion: You’ve Built More Than an Essay

You started with a blank page and a feeling of dread. Now, you have a structured, argued, and polished piece of writing. More importantly, you have a process.

The next time an essay is assigned, you won’t feel panic. You’ll feel prepared. You’ll know to start with the prompt, build your thesis, outline your points, and trust the drafting process. Essay writing becomes a skill you own, not a mystery you fear.

Your Next Step: Pick one upcoming assignment and try this system, step-by-step. I promise it gets easier and faster each time.

Let’s Practice Together (Comment Below!):

Grab a prompt from one of your classes. In the comments, write:

1. The directive verb you circled.
2. Your one-sentence brainstormed idea.
3. A first try at a thesis statement.

I’ll hop into the comments and give feedback to help you get started. Let’s write!

Up Next: In our next post, we’ll tackle the companion to this guide: “How to Write a Speech: From Blank Page to Standing Ovation.” Subscribe to get notified!

(Internal Linking Suggestion Placeholder: In future posts, we will link TO this post from: “The 5-Paragraph Essay”, “Thesis Statement Crafting”, “Outline Like a Pro”, etc.)

Introduction: The Power of Your Own Story

What’s the most impactful story you’ve ever heard? Chances are, it wasn’t a list of facts. It was a personal journey—a moment of failure, a spark of courage, a lesson learned the hard way.

A narrative essay is your invitation to become the storyteller. Unlike other essays that argue or analyze, a narrative essay immerses. It says, “Come, see the world through my eyes for a moment.” For many students, this is the most intimidating—and the most rewarding—type of writing. It asks you to be vulnerable, to dig into your own memory, and to find the universal truth in your personal experience.

I’ve read thousands of student narratives. The ones that stay with me aren’t about the most dramatic events; they’re about the most honest ones. The quiet moment of understanding between a parent and child. The awkward, hilarious failure that taught resilience. The ordinary day that became extraordinary in hindsight.

This guide will walk you through transforming a memory from a fleeting thought into a structured, powerful story. We’ll move from the paralyzing question of “What should I write about?” to the confident process of “How do I tell it best?” Your story matters. Let’s learn how to share it.

Part 1: What is a Narrative Essay? (It’s Not a Diary Entry)

First, let’s clarify. A narrative essay is a short, focused story about a specific personal experience, told for the purpose of making a point or conveying a theme.

Key Differences:

• VS. A Short Story: A narrative essay is non-fiction. It’s true, or truth-based. While you use storytelling techniques, you’re not inventing characters or plots.
• VS. A Book Report: It’s personal. You are the main character. The focus is on your perspective and growth.
• VS. A Diary Entry: It’s structured for an audience. It has a deliberate arc, vivid details, and a clear purpose beyond just recording an event.

The Core Ingredients:

• A Personal Experience: You were there.
• A Clear Point (Thesis): Why are you telling this story? What did you learn? How did you change?
• Storytelling Elements: Plot, characters, setting, conflict, and resolution.
• Vivid Description: You make the reader feel like they were there too.

Part 2: Choosing Your Story: The “Kernel of Truth” Method

The secret to a great narrative isn’t finding the most epic event of your life. It’s finding the moment that contained a “kernel of truth”—a realization, a shift in perspective, a lesson that stuck.

Ask yourself these questions to mine your memories:

1. Moments of “First” or “Last”:
   • First time you felt truly independent?
   • Last conversation with someone important?
   • First major failure or disappointment?
2. Moments of Challenge or Conflict:
   • A time you stood up for someone (or yourself)?
   • A moment you had to make a difficult choice?
   • A challenge that seemed impossible at the time?
3. Moments of Realization:
   • When did you realize a parent or mentor was human?
   • When did you understand something important about yourself?
   • When did a childhood belief get shattered or confirmed?
4. Seemingly “Small” Moments with Big Resonance:
   • A routine car ride where everything changed.
   • A glance across a room that held unexpected meaning.
   • A quiet act of kindness you gave or received.

The Test: Does thinking about this moment stir a specific emotion or physical sensation in you? That’s a sign it has the depth to explore.

Part 3: 50+ Narrative Essay Topic Sparks

Here are categorized prompts to ignite your memory. Don’t just pick one; scan them and see which one makes your heart beat a little faster.

Childhood & Family

1. The family tradition that shaped you.
2. Getting lost and found (literally or metaphorically).
3. The day you realized your parents weren’t superheroes.
4. A lesson learned from a grandparent.
5. Moving to a new home or school.
6. An epic sibling rivalry (or alliance).
7. The toy or object you were deeply attached to.

School & Learning
8. The teacher who changed your trajectory.
9. A group project disaster (or triumph).
10. The subject you hated but learned to appreciate.
11. A time you cheated (or were tempted to) and the fallout.
12. An embarrassing moment in front of the class.
13. Winning or losing a major competition.
14. The friend you made (or lost) in an unexpected way.

Challenges & Failures
15. The biggest risk you took and what it taught you.
16. A time you were profoundly disappointed in yourself.
17. Overcoming a physical fear (heights, water, etc.).
18. Dealing with an illness or injury (yours or a loved one’s).
19. A public failure and how you recovered.
20. A time you had to apologize sincerely.
21. Navigating a conflict between two friends.

Identity & Growth
22. The moment you felt like an adult for the first time.
23. An experience that challenged your cultural or personal beliefs.
24. A time you felt like an outsider and how you coped.
25. Discovering a passion or talent you didn’t know you had.
26. The book, movie, or song that altered your perspective.
27. A conversation that changed your mind about something important.
28. Learning a skill that required patience and grit.

Travel & Place
29. Getting culturally lost in a new place.
30. A journey that didn’t go as planned.
31. The smell, sound, or sight that instantly transports you to a specific time.
32. A local spot that holds deep personal history.
33. An encounter with a stranger that left a lasting mark.

Humor & Light
34. The most ridiculous fashion phase you went through.
35. A prank that went hilariously right (or wrong).
36. A misunderstanding that spiraled out of control.
37. Your first (disastrous) attempt at cooking, dating, or driving.
38. A pet with a personality that taught you something.

Part 4: Structuring Your Story: The Narrative Arc

Your essay should follow a satisfying arc. Use this classic five-part structure:

1. Exposition (The Setup):

• Your Introduction. Set the scene. Introduce the “you” at the beginning of the story. Establish the time, place, and context. End your intro with a hint of the theme or the question your story will explore (this is your narrative thesis).
• Example Thesis: “I never understood the meaning of patience until the summer I spent trying to teach my stubborn grandfather how to text.”

2. Rising Action (The Buildup):

• The Body Paragraphs Begin. Describe the events leading up to the main event. Build tension. Show the conflicts, the attempts, the frustrations. Use details to make the reader invested.

3. Climax (The Turning Point):

• The Heart of Your Essay. This is the moment of peak emotion, conflict, or realization. The “aha!” moment, the blow-up, the breakthrough. Slow down here. Use the most vivid sensory details.

4. Falling Action (The Consequences):

• What happened immediately after the climax? How did the characters react? How did the energy shift? This section is often shorter.

5. Resolution (The New Normal):

• Your Conclusion. Fast-forward. Show how you were changed. Reflect on the lesson learned. Connect the specific story to a broader, universal truth. Leave the reader with a final, resonant image or thought that echoes your theme.

Part 5: Show, Don’t Tell: The Golden Rule

This is the skill that separates a good narrative from a great one.

• Telling: “I was nervous.”
• Showing: “My palms were slick against the cool metal of the locker. I could hear my own heartbeat, a frantic drum solo in my ears, as I approached the classroom door.”

How to “Show”:

• Sensory Details: What did you see, hear, smell, taste, feel (touch)? Not just “the room was messy,” but “the room smelled of stale pizza and wet dog, with textbooks spread across the floor like fallen dominos.”
• Dialogue: Use sparingly, but use it to reveal character and advance the plot. “I can do it myself,” Grandpa muttered, snatching the phone from my hand.
• Internal Monologue: Share your thoughts in italics or seamlessly woven in. This is it, I thought. The moment I either fly or fall.
• Action Verbs: “She walked in” vs. “She shuffled/sprinted/stomped/sauntered in.”

Part 6: Finding Your Voice & Reflecting

Voice: Write in your natural, honest voice. If you’re funny, let humor peek through. If the moment was solemn, the tone should match. Don’t try to sound overly formal or “smart.”

Reflection (The “So What?”): This is critical. The reader needs to know why this story matters to you and what it might mean for them. Weave reflection throughout, but especially in the conclusion.

• Bad Reflection: “I learned that patience is important.” (Too vague).
• Good Reflection: “That summer, I realized patience isn’t about waiting. It’s about listening. It’s about seeing the world from someone else’s locked screen and choosing to sit beside them, not to fix it for them, but to help them find their own way through.”

Conclusion: Your Story Awaits

You have lived a thousand stories worthy of telling. The narrative essay is your chance to pause, to examine one thread, and to follow it to see what beautiful pattern it reveals about who you are and how you’ve grown.

Don’t worry about writing the “perfect” story. Worry about writing the true one. Start with the memory that feels the most alive in your mind. Put us there with you. The grades will follow, but more importantly, you’ll create something that resonates long after the assignment is over.

Your Next Step: Set a timer for 10 minutes. Pick one topic from the list above that intrigues you. Don’t write the essay—just freewrite about the memory. Describe it using all five senses. See what emerges.

Share Your Story Spark (Comment Below!):

Let’s start the conversation. It’s the best way to beat the blank page.

In the comments, share:

1. One narrative topic you’re considering (from the list or your own).
2. The “kernel of truth”—the lesson, change, or realization that moment holds for you.

Example:

• Topic: The time I came in last place in a cross-country race.
• Kernel of Truth: I learned that finishing something difficult, even at the very back, builds a different kind of confidence than winning ever could.

I’ll reply with encouragement and ideas to help you develop it. Let’s uncover your story together.